Miss You..

Sometimes I feel alone...

Son, you are leading nowhere,

Oh my son! close your shatter box,

Seal your dreamy world,

Stop your sailing boat.

My son, It leads you nowhere,

Be a Bookworm, Win monthly funds,

Find happiness in six digits,

Travel from home to hell on four wheels.

My son this is life,

Your theatre in your brain

leads you nowhere except

an unworthy visit to wonderland...

Most of the father's I seen used to say these words and wanted their children to be as said...

But there are few, who says,

My son, You are a gift,

You are my love,

Your heart sings I know

Dance to those tunes...

My son you dream I know,

Let them happen,

Give them life

And live your own life..

I don't need any digits of paper,

I need days of your happiness

In which you smile and make others smile,

My son, Live your own life..

Dear son, living a life

doesn't mean earning money,

owning walls or cars,

Or sharing a life with loved ones...

My son, But living a life means,

Living in your dreams and 

bringing them alive,

Share your happiness with your loved ones,

Cry alone, Make everyone smile..

Ultimately live a life 

that you chosen, Don't sacrifice,

face your struggles alone,

Win your game, My son I wanna see you smile...

After all I could only say Miss you Dad...

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

one can easily distinguish whether the first half of this poem is nice or the second part... very nice theme... liked it alot

[Surya]

Thank you Abhishek.....am glad you liked it...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

surya...this is soo wonderful....your words are those real feelings that came out on this platform..and my dearest..may god grant you happiness and success wherever you go!...keep writing dear!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Wajiha, Hope the same for you, Smile always.....and am glad you started liking my works, haha...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahaha...what do you mean suu/?....

[Surya]

hahaha, just kiddig...:)

[Rassoul]

Omg I loved this so much, you wrote it so well and your words are totally amazing.

And I miss my dad too tbh.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Rassoul, am glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

This is very nice to read. Beautifully written. I loved it.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher, am glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)