Sheep And Shepherd...

Tickling clock turns around

Taunting shepherd goes around

A flock of sheep in herding sound

Feels like a morning mourn 

After a tickling clock..

Bumpy land with ups and downs

Sheeps like goats goading in,

Flock of birds on their backs

Making the shepherd to fizz around

Greeny grass as their lunch

Blue waves at their necks

Gentle wind on their wool

Rising horizon at their eyes

Lazy shepherd back to home

Bagging the moon and stars 

On the way back and imprisoned

The flock in a fold

Making the melodious sound 

A horny blaze....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. You made me visions sheep and shepherd. I liked the place and location. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[barleygirl]

There might be a million poems already written about shepherds, but your approach is always stunningly fresh & imaginative! I love your imagery, which is simple, yet surprising in its clarity. I thought maybe you meant "TICKING" clock (instead of "tickling"), but then you used this word again, so I guess it's intentional. It's thought-provoking how a clock can be tickling, but this is just what I mean by your startling observations of everyday life ideas.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Margie....:)

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

This was a fun read Surya, thanks for sharing...

[Surya]

Haha,Thank you Sir...:)

[Priyanshi]

About sheep, I could imagine every line very well...
You wrote it really, very wonderfully.
Great job.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi....hahaha..., am glad you you did liked it...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[pragya gaur]

As the other works I enjoyed this one too... awEsome surya ji

[Surya]

Thank you Pragya...:)

[wordman]

you painted some vivid images,almost thought i was herding sheep

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Wordman for this kind review...:)

[Mr.Writer]

I really enjoyed reading this Surya, as it made me feel I was on a fun and humorous adventure with mixes of emotions around me!
Well done, keep it up!

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Surya! :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Unique and refreshing read. Well done.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Abraham George]

nice imagination. Add one picture to this will be more better.

like this- https://us.123rf.com/450wm/keithlevit/keithlevit1212/keithlevit121201110/17227932-herd-of-sheep-grazing-in-the-field-sacred-valley-cusco-region-peru.jpg?ver=6

[Surya]

Sure, I will try...Thank you..:)

[Anjali]

Nice creativity used up there, I liked it! A good piece!😊

[Surya]

Thank you Anjali..:)

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!