Rhapsody...

Rhapsody...

A Poem by Surya

Melodies are her words
benevolent is her grace
emeralds as her essence
bestowed mellifluent lies

Nothing is as sharp as her
Sabre dignity which had
cut my flesh of love and I
rained as giant of words

memories of her at stake
cursed was me! When
my exuberant smile
stored all her lolls

love is a mere word
honor is dignity 
and shattered are dreams 
in a house that never built
for her and me

© 2018 Surya


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you have described her amazingly and how the feelings were towards her are beautiful too. At the end comes the bitter truth of reality that cannot be avoided. we have to accept it and stop dreaming of what was never ours from the beginning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


your poems are always outstanding....and in this one, last stanza is very truthful.
likhte rho
:))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Priyanshi...:)
'Shattered are drems in a house that never built for her and me'
In the last line you summed up. This poem is nostalgic of how you are fascinated by her and in the end you are back to reality by accepting the fact.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Surya

3 Years Ago

Facts cant be altered...thank you saher..:)
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

That is right. They can only be accepted.
As an independent woman, I love it when a love poem shows us a woman in fresh & striking ways . . . not the typical soft "womanly" junk! Any woman would be delighted to be described this way. This poem shows me that you really pay attention to the character of a person, more than their outer presence. Your writing is always unique (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Surya

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment, margie..:)
the house we never built,but it was real

Posted 3 Years Ago


Surya

3 Years Ago

Seems so...

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