Sunflower

Sunflower

A Poem by Sweet Brevity

Every hurt and hardship is an opportunity
for
GROWTH,
So grow.
Grow,
Grow into the green.
Grow,
Grow beyond the grey.
Grow,
Grow above the blue.
And
BLOOM!
Yes, bloom.
Bloom into the billowing
Clouds!
Bloom.
Bloom into the atmosphere !
Bloom.
Let your tear soaked
Petals kiss
The face of the sun!
KISS.

Has anyone ever told you?
How your leaves are wafting
And how your very heart
Instills and infuses
Light..

Breathe in !
For your soul is more fragrant
Than sunshine
Itself.

© 2014 Sweet Brevity


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It's like the fact that you're talking to the sunflower is what's making it GROW, BLOOM, KISS. Keep up the encouragement...we need more sunflowers!! ( : O )

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow, what a perfect analogy...great use of the repetition...

so much like Beat poetry...the last stanza wraps it up so nicely...in a very comfortable fragrance.

we just have to overcome the dark feelings because our heart will infuse light if we let it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like the continually form bigger capital as an emphasis word, like a chain between stanza

thanks for share :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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