Sick Minds

Sometimes I forget how this mind of

mines works.

The concert on the roof of my

shoulders is concerning.

A concert of depression constantly

orchestrates trouble within the

walls of my head. 

Taking over my life without lesson.

I'm unable to go left nor right.

In my head, it feels like a whirlpool

tossing thinking round n round.

What gathered thoughts left, picked

apart and salvaged, I struggle wit

the norm.  Still complex issues topple

my world yet no one recognize my..... 

cry.

bare feet.

filthy clothes.

cuts.

endless bags.

medication.

but I do remember my appointment

wit the doc for he shall continue

where we left off last session, 

Committing me. 

Reviews

[Taylor]

It doesn't mater if they say your sick because you can overcome anything so don't let people define you like that. This is beautiful but sad and relatable.

[Neville]

Very powerful, very emotive and very well writ

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks very much

[Pete]

can feel the turmoil and confusion in this. love the imagery you conjure with your words. powerfully effective.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Again thanks for the nice review and hope you enjoyed this as well as the others.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and realistic thoughts in the words dear Roxanne. You made the reader feel and taste the situation. Madness is a part of the all of us. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Yes the human mind tis a bit scary, take for instance now in days, Los Vagas(the devil's playground)!! such tragic lost for the entire country. thanks for reviewing my poems.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[wordman]

a touching write,i guess we could all relate to this

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Once again thank you for the review.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[ROXANE DORSEY]

nothing serious, just a poem thought out quick.