Places

Where you and I go.

 

Let's go, Love

I'll take you again

Remember all the places we've went?

The ocean a mirror, the sky a window

I'm sure you couldn't forget..

 

Come along, Dear

Off to the moon again

We climbed a silver staircase, raced to the summit,

Stars all around, Ahead and full sail

Your eyes so alive in wonder...

 

Here we are, Kid

Here at this place again, this room full of music

Alone in this concert hall, waltzing to the orchestra

performing the soundtrack of us.

Take me back again.

 

Follow me, Love

At the last place again

Our park in full autumn, leaves colouring in the wind

Park bench for two, fly our kites in the blue

That piano playing off in the distance.

Author's Note

Haha, kind of obscure, I know.

Reviews

[Sasha]

It is a little obscure but not headache inducing obscure like some of these romantic poems I see around. I understood what you were getting at and thought you used some nice imagery. The one thing I didn't understand is "Here we are, Kid". It seemed odd to address your SO that way, but I've heard worse.
Good job.

[Donna M. Burr]

This is a beautifully written piece and I adored the imagery. I love the different places I am taken to and you paint a beautiful picture in each verse.

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

I love the use of imagery :) it made me feel more involved. It had a great flow to it as well.

[Abdul Aziz]

Beautiful, mate. Simple and elegant. Are these lyrics to any particular song you've written?

Btw, there's an extra "the" in the third line of the first stanza.

[Vin]

I really enjoyed reading this :) The flow was great and the imagery makes you feel so involved in what'e happening! Amazing, well done, thanks for sharing :)

-Beth