Life's worries

Life's worries

A Poem by TamerQtaish

One last kiss

On these burning cigarette lips

I never felt so alone

Still I always knew life is just a loan


Lived like a rebel

Between heaven and hell

Now it’s goodbye and farewell


With a fading heartbeat

My life feels just like a dream

All the memories time can’t cheat

Into this darkness with one last breath I scream


So now I close these eyes

This world surely got me by surprise

Just too tired to wait for the sunrise


I simply hope that my deeds

Will erase my sins and keep the memories

I hope that my seeds won’t grow into weeds

And lady life won’t say one less of my worries

© 2012 TamerQtaish

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Wonderful as always my dear. Always gives one pause to think.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Great sense of writing!!

Your poems are exceptional for sure.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow man!
i can say this is one of your best!
need i not say, that you will not pass subtle and alone!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

Thanks bro, I think u reviewed it on facebook ages ago, but thanks again :)

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3 Reviews
Added on March 22, 2012
Last Updated on March 22, 2012



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