Life's worries

One last kiss

On these burning cigarette lips

I never felt so alone

Still I always knew life is just a loan

 

Lived like a rebel

Between heaven and hell

Now it’s goodbye and farewell

 

With a fading heartbeat

My life feels just like a dream

All the memories time can’t cheat

Into this darkness with one last breath I scream

 

So now I close these eyes

This world surely got me by surprise

Just too tired to wait for the sunrise

 

I simply hope that my deeds

Will erase my sins and keep the memories

I hope that my seeds won’t grow into weeds

And lady life won’t say one less of my worries

Reviews

[Katseye]

Wonderful as always my dear. Always gives one pause to think.

[RED]

Great sense of writing!!

Your poems are exceptional for sure.

[A.r. Bazian]

wow man!
i can say this is one of your best!
need i not say, that you will not pass subtle and alone!

[TamerQtaish]

Thanks bro, I think u reviewed it on facebook ages ago, but thanks again :)