Because of you, I hate you

 

Twisted holes

Burning pits

Fiery heart

 

Is this how it is

Is this how its going to stay

This is hell

 

Get me out

Let me go

I want to leave

 

No more haven

No more peace

All destroyed

 

Yelling

Shouting

I've had enough

 

Give me release

Give me an escape

Give me my life back

 

Every decision

Every choice

Effects us

 

You make these mistakes

You make these choices

You ruin our lives!

 

How could you

You do it so callously

As if you don’t care!

 

You say you care

You say you love us

Then why do this?

 

Sinking in depression

Seeking attention

Becoming violent

 

You have made us this way

We have lost ourselves

Because of you!

 

I

 

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Y

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Author's Note

Please comment!

Reviews

[patricia]

That first stanza was superb! The rest was an heartfelt vent that i am sure many can relate to. Thanks...you have talent.

[Rose of Gondor]

Intense emotions of anger, hate, and the feeling that you've just had enough.

[Alana McGuire]

Oooh I can definitely feel the waves of fury in this! I like it a lot. You captivate the reader with your descriptions in the opening and it doesn't slow down at all. Great write full of raw emotion :)

[olla]

you are very young and what you write.. although intensly real.. is a beginning.. as you mature your ability to express your feelings will also mature.. your work is very good.. and it will beome even better as time passes..

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool.

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

AWESOME!!!!!!

[Chrissy]

Good Job. :)