Self Destruct

look at me

see the rage

there’s a tempest

rising within me

feel my icy stare

on you

know that I have

limits, boundaries

and they have been

crossed by you

always you

pushing me

testing me

satisfying

your sick ego

at my expense

no more

my love

remember this

anything

that you

construct

may one day

self destruct

Reviews

[SM Davis]

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Well done Tania. I felt your rage.

[Queen of the Damned]

The anger from this burns as hot as a wild fire! I think the short lines give it more power....displaying you are at your limit. Hope whoever this was for was burned by this....ouch! lol.

[Papillion]

This is a very strong piece,you have written this so well. I can't help wondering who recieved this rant.

[James Mayfield]

I can see this being screamed into somebodies face. It doesn't quite read like poetry to me, instead of reading it I hear it being yelled at someone instead. Great read.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

The anger is so vivid in this poem. Great write, I really love this!!!

Heather

[The Gentleman]

I am wondering if someone did you wrong... Pertty Powerful piece of writing!

Remind me not to get you mad anythime soon... *Smiles*

Always, The Gentleman

[None]

Poetry is so useful as well as fulfilling. We are able to get our thoughts down on paper and let anger out. Using few words you said so much here. Extremely effective write.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonderful piece....I can feel the anger as you typed this piece. WOW......you captured so much feeling in this piece. Great job.....
*captain quietly sneeks away*

[Mystic Dreams]

The shortness of the lines shows the anger of the words and give them more strength. Great punch!

[desertraven]

powerful statement. good flow. this review will self destruct in ten..nine..eight.. lol

Great piece!
Sandra♥