THE RAINY NIGHT ⛈️ .

THE RAINY NIGHT ⛈️ .

A Story by Taniska 😊😊

It was raining heavily and the street lights had gone off and I was returning from the hospital where my friend was admitted.My house is in the third street and suddenly the lighting flash on my eyes and I couldn't see anything ,I had no option till the rain stop and I went inside a building which is under construction.where I found a girl standing in front of me,i went closed to her to know about her and I asked her my first question "who are you ?" after listening me she turned around and I found my friend who has been admitted in the hospital since last week ,i got frightened by seeing her at that time at that place and when I asked her that " what are you doing here? , just now i had saw you in the hospital , how could it be possible ? " ,her smiley face answered me that now she was alright ,I was feeling hungry ,so she gave me the fruits which  I had given to her . I also offered that fruits to her but she was doing nothing instead of smiling .Her smiley face brought a fear on me ,I asked her about the reason behind her  happiness and she answered "you don't want to see me as happy well the reason is that now I am free of that severe pain that's why I'm smiling " I didn't understood her .And without questioning any more things to her I slept on the floor .Next morning I found a black blanket was lying on me but I didn't found  my freind and I got tensed and went back to that hospital again where to meet her and I heard that my freind was gone off since last night at 12 :00 am at that time I understood that she was helping me as an angel .

Moral : From this story we get that true freinds are never dies and true friendship never lies.

© 2018 Taniska 😊😊


Author's Note

Taniska  😊😊
This story is not an reality base .

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Honestly, I kinda feel creep out as I read your story but all in all it was a good one with deep meaning and a wonderful lesson behind it.
Good Job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx for such a beautiful review I glad u like it (( smiles))😊😊😊😊😊😊
This story has a little bit of a "Halloween" feeling . . . but I don't think you mean it this way. The way you explain the spooky rainy night gives this feeling that something bad is going to happen. About halfway thru the conversation between ghost & narrator, I got the feeling this was a ghost & the friend had died in the hospital. You do a very good job of a slow-slow-slow reveal to build up suspense for your ending surprise. There are some bumps in your English construction, but your story is clear to understand (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx Mam for visiting my page ,I glad that u like it ((((smiles)))) 😊😊😊😊
In the starting I thought I would be real, thanks for clarifying 😊😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amada

5 Years Ago

Ohhh 😳😳😳
Amada

5 Years Ago

It seems you love RD sharma (Maths) a lot. 😂
Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Yaa I love it
This is not a real story and suggest me 😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on October 2, 2018
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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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