I fell in love with blue sky 😉

I fell in love with blue sky 😉

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

Whenever I gaze towards the sky,
It always reminds me of you and me,
The day we have spend together,
Whenever we smile whenever we cry.

It reminds me,
The lovely memories of you.
And makes me realize,
That you left me alone too.

The promise you gave me,
Not to leave my hands,
But you broke that,
Just like breaking a glass.

And now I'm in love ,
With this peaceful blue sky.
That gives me hope,
To rise high .

© 2020 Taniska 😊😊


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This was a very emotional and heartfelt poem to read. It also was quite heartbreaking and upsetting as everyone has experienced heartbreak at some point in their own life. When love has gone wrong. But the final ending was hopefully, positive and inspirational as you took from the beauty of the blue sky above. To rise above all that drags you down regards love. And see the beauty of a new dawn appearing each and every new day ahead of you. And learnt that love like everything else moves on.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

6 Months Ago

Thanks D for visiting my page . I'm glad you like it . 😊😊
I don't usually like reading about love & heartbreak where the narrator seems to be blaming the other person. S**t always happens between two people & both people contribute to what goes down. Even tho I don't like this way of looking at love & heartbreak, what you write is exactly how most people feel about it -- blaming the other person. The best part of this poem is how this narrator has turned around her resentment, deciding to put her hopes & feelings where the future could be brighter (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

7 Months Ago

Yeah , Mam that's true . I also hate reading negative heart break love poems like this one. But the .. read more
A sad poem, but the ending has hope. Your ending is uplifting and tells me everything will be OK in time. Nicely penned.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

7 Months Ago

Thanks Mam for such a nice review . I'm really glad that you visited my page . ((( Smiles ))) 😊�.. read more

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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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