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Destiny

Destiny

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

She knew it well,
She has feelings for him,
And so did he.

He knew it well,
He can trust her blindly,
And so did she .

Both of them tried ,
Really very hard,
To confess their feelings,
But in the end ,
Everything changed.

They were separated,
And never met again,
Is this the end ?
Will they meet again?

© 2020 Taniska 😊😊


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Beautifully written. Great poem Taniska. Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Mam 😊😊. (Smiles )
sometimes chances pass us by when we don't express our feelings...we assume the other knows how we feel.
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Exactly sir . That happens and that's the reality . Thanks sir for your kind visit 😊😊. (( Smil.. read more
Unfortunately, people don't always live happily ever after. The time in this one was just not right.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Yeah cause in this poem both souls wants to get together forever but what should they do 'destiny '.. read more
Situations, people, life in general. Just happen and move on. No right no wrong. Just life being life. Nicely expressed and heartfelt.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Thanks Mam . I'm glad to know you like it . (( Smiles )) 😊😊
This is the complete opposite of what I said about your other poem. Here, there is NO BLAME at all. Life just happens . . . like destiny! This is what I love to see in a love or heartbreak poem. I love how this message is so intelligent & honest & realistic about how things really happen between people. I especially love that you offer no answers, just questions . . . that's real life! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Thank you mam. I hope I touched your heart through this poem right. For me you are really good reade.. read more

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Added on January 26, 2020
Last Updated on January 26, 2020
Tags: Love, separation, broken heart

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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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I am a girl of 16 and I'm here to share my writings with you and also to accept your good suggestion. 😊 Keep smiling 😄😃🤣😆😉😊😀😁&.. more..

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