Still searching you ....

Still searching you ....

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

Im still searching you,
In the city and crowd.
waiting to meet you,
And hear your sound.

I'm still finding you,
In my heart.
Because I don't wanna ,
Leave you apart .

I am wondering,
Where you could be now.
In  stars or in the  moon,
I promise that I will ,
Meet you soon.

Im wishing to meet you,
Somehow  in my dreams.
Just to gaze at you.
And to read your screams.

I just want to feel ,
Your touch again.
To see your smile
Again and again .

I just wanna ,
Stare at you .
in the same way,
Like I used to

In simple ways,
Im just waiting to meet you ,
Somehow , someday ,
And somewhere in some way.

© 2020 Taniska 😊😊


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The best part of this poem is how it feels like there's a little bit of the narrator talking to someone from the past, but mostly this feels like the narrator is talking to someone yet to meet in the future. This dreamy dividing line between past & future makes this message feel like it could be someone wishing someone would return to their lives in a different form, maybe, or in dreams. Also it reminds me of how a person could be longing for pieces of him/herself to return, after being fractured by abuse or other trauma. Nice rhyme & rhythm . . . looks like simple longing on the surface, but there are deeper threads running thru this, thought-provoking (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taniska  😊😊

6 Months Ago

First of all thank you so much Mam for visiting my page. Secondly I want tell you that you are a goo.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

6 Months Ago

Thank you for being so nice :)



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A poem of longing and hope for a love interest. It's worth waiting for to ensure you meet that special person who is going to make such a difference to your world. You convey your emotions well in this piece.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Mam for your kind visit . I hope I may find that special one someday 😁. ((Smile.. read more
So much longing in your words. I hope you find who you are looking for. Don't give up the search.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

6 Months Ago

Yaa ,sure I will never give up . Thanks Mam for your visit . I'm glad you like it 😊😊.((smiles .. read more
Lea Sheryn

6 Months Ago

You're welcome
The best part of this poem is how it feels like there's a little bit of the narrator talking to someone from the past, but mostly this feels like the narrator is talking to someone yet to meet in the future. This dreamy dividing line between past & future makes this message feel like it could be someone wishing someone would return to their lives in a different form, maybe, or in dreams. Also it reminds me of how a person could be longing for pieces of him/herself to return, after being fractured by abuse or other trauma. Nice rhyme & rhythm . . . looks like simple longing on the surface, but there are deeper threads running thru this, thought-provoking (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taniska  😊😊

6 Months Ago

First of all thank you so much Mam for visiting my page. Secondly I want tell you that you are a goo.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

6 Months Ago

Thank you for being so nice :)

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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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I am a girl of 16 and I'm here to share my writings with you and also to accept your good suggestion. 😊 Keep smiling 😄😃🤣😆😉😊😀😁&.. more..

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