You are special for me .

You are special for me .

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

The first God for me is you .
Who gave me a new life.

The first teacher for me is you.
Who taught me by holding my hands.

The first freind for me is you.
Who support me all the time.

The first doctor for me is you.
Who cured my injuries .

The first eye of me is you.
Who helped me seeing the real world.

The first fighter for me is you.
Who fights for me against my enemies.

The first world for me is you.
Who gave me the knowledge to enjoy my life.

I love you mom and I promise you that I will never leave you alone.

© 2018 Taniska 😊😊


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I really love it and I enjoyed reading it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx mam (smiles)
Very deep thought...REAlly EMotional...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx siddhidatri for your kind visit ((smiles)) 😊😊😊😊
A sweet, wholesome, lovely poem. That makes you smile. And nice to be compassionate, thoughtful and proud of your family, teacher and doctor.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind visit Dawn 😊😊😊😊😊
I love the way your message feels like it MIGHT be about “mom” as early as the first stanza, but this doesn’t become clear, for sure, until the last line. Being a mom is a difficult job & many moms give more than they have to give. So moms deserve a dedication like this *smile* I also feel your poem could be aimed at some other nurturing loved one that might be all these things to someone, possibly some did not get this kind of love & protection from a mom (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Mam really mom's are special . Thanx for your kind words smiles
She is the sunlight in my day.
She is the moon I see far away.
She is the tree I lean upon.
She is the one that makes troubles be gone.
She is the one who taught me about life,
How not to fight and what is right.
She is the words inside my song.
She is my love, my life, my mom.
She is the one who cares for me.
She is the eyes that help me see.
She is the one who knows me best,
When it's time to have fun and time to rest.
She is the one who has helped me to dream.
She hears my heart and she hears my screams.
Afraid of life but looking for love.
I'm blessed, for God sent her from above.
She is my friend, my heart, and my soul.
She is the greatest friend I know.
She is the words inside my song.
She is my love, my life, my mom.

Yes moms are very special for all of us.
Miss you muma.



Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Sorry my mistake talk with her okk..
Amada

5 Years Ago

I do it daily 😊😊😊.
Thanks for suggestion
Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Hmm okk good 😄😄😄😄
A mother is a lifeline indeed. God made them to stand in for Him, on earth. This is such a fine write, Taniska.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx dhara ,i glad that you like it ((((((smiles)))))))
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. Keep writing always Taniska :))))
(Smiles)
Dear Taniska, this is a fine tribute to your mum, who has her protective shawl ( metaphorically speaking) close to your skin at all times. Looking out for you, as us mum's do. I hope you share your lines with her so that she knows the full extent of your love and admiration.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx Mam for your kind words and my Mum is really close to me as i use to share everything with her.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Wonderful to hear and for her to know how truly appreciated she is. We only ever have one mum :)

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Added on November 6, 2018
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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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