You are special for me .

The first God for me is you .
Who gave me a new life.

The first teacher for me is you.
Who taught me by holding my hands.

The first freind for me is you.
Who support me all the time.

The first doctor for me is you.
Who cured my injuries .

The first eye of me is you.
Who helped me seeing the real world.

The first fighter for me is you.
Who fights for me against my enemies.

The first world for me is you.
Who gave me the knowledge to enjoy my life.

I love you mom and I promise you that I will never leave you alone.

Reviews

[Flowers of Eternity]

I really love it and I enjoyed reading it!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam (smiles)

[Siddhidatri Pande]

Very deep thought...REAlly EMotional...

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx siddhidatri for your kind visit ((smiles)) 😊😊😊😊

[Onlyme]

A sweet, wholesome, lovely poem. That makes you smile. And nice to be compassionate, thoughtful and proud of your family, teacher and doctor.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you so much for your kind visit Dawn 😊😊😊😊😊

[barleygirl]

I love the way your message feels like it MIGHT be about “mom” as early as the first stanza, but this doesn’t become clear, for sure, until the last line. Being a mom is a difficult job & many moms give more than they have to give. So moms deserve a dedication like this *smile* I also feel your poem could be aimed at some other nurturing loved one that might be all these things to someone, possibly some did not get this kind of love & protection from a mom (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you so much Mam really mom's are special . Thanx for your kind words smiles

[Amada]

She is the sunlight in my day.
She is the moon I see far away.
She is the tree I lean upon.
She is the one that makes troubles be gone.
She is the one who taught me about life,
How not to fight and what is right.
She is the words inside my song.
She is my love, my life, my mom.
She is the one who cares for me.
She is the eyes that help me see.
She is the one who knows me best,
When it's time to have fun and time to rest.
She is the one who has helped me to dream.
She hears my heart and she hears my screams.
Afraid of life but looking for love.
I'm blessed, for God sent her from above.
She is my friend, my heart, and my soul.
She is the greatest friend I know.
She is the words inside my song.
She is my love, my life, my mom.

Yes moms are very special for all of us.
Miss you muma.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Yaa all moms are special as they do so many sacrifices for us ,I love my mom very much (((( smiles)))) 😊😊😊😊😊

[Taniska 😊😊]

What do you mean miss you mum

[Amada]

Ohh I live in hostel so.

[Amada]

And my exam preparation (Evil spirit) doesn't allow me to take holiday and go home and chill out

[Taniska 😊😊]

And this poem is very nice just publish it and your emotions are really true RB 😊😊

[Taniska 😊😊]

Ohh in hostel oooo so what call your mom and with her by video calling .😄😄😄

[Taniska 😊😊]

Sorry my mistake talk with her okk..

[Amada]

I do it daily 😊😊😊.
Thanks for suggestion

[Taniska 😊😊]

Hmm okk good 😄😄😄😄

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

A mother is a lifeline indeed. God made them to stand in for Him, on earth. This is such a fine write, Taniska.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx dhara ,i glad that you like it ((((((smiles)))))))

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You are welcome. Keep writing always Taniska :))))
(Smiles)

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Taniska, this is a fine tribute to your mum, who has her protective shawl ( metaphorically speaking) close to your skin at all times. Looking out for you, as us mum's do. I hope you share your lines with her so that she knows the full extent of your love and admiration.

Chris

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx Mam for your kind words and my Mum is really close to me as i use to share everything with her ,she is my best friend 😊😊😊😊. ((((Smiles))))

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful to hear and for her to know how truly appreciated she is. We only ever have one mum :)