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Diwali Night

Diwali Night

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊


The street shines .
With many candle lights.
The fire crackers.
Lighten this Diwali night.

Children are playing.
And eating many sweets.
People are enjoying.
And crackling fireworks in the streets.

The sky is enlighten.
With the lanterns like fire flies.
Diyas are lighting.
Removing darkness from our lives.

With full of joy.
And full of happiness.
Wishing you .
A very delightful Diwali.

           HAPPY DIWALI.

© 2018 Taniska 😊😊


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What a superb poem Tan, great atmosphere, imagery and emotions that come flooding from within this delightful beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing this gift with us all.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You have created some wonderful joyous imagery and an atmosphere of celebration in your lines. An uplifting poem for your readers. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanks mam for visiting my page. I glad u like it smiles 😊😊😊
From your poem, I can really see the children smiling, hear the cracks of the fire crackers, feel the coolness of night and enjoy the beautiful festival. It is such a beautiful poem, hoping to read more and keep up the good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx mam for your kind words ((smiles )) 😊😊😊
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Mmmmm....Diwali's smell here! Even if tis already gone but I love your energy on rejuvenating this festival with this beautiful poem....
Thanks for sharing dear.....Be blessed :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx tahsin 😄😄😄.
I really love this. This is the poster child for SHOW don't tell -- the first rule of good writing. Instead of explaining to us what Diwali is, you SHOW us what it is. That's perfect. I can picture it with all my senses. I love finding out about what's special to other people in different cultures. This is a great share of your world (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


barleygirl

5 Years Ago

One correction: "hostiles" might sound better as "hostilities" . . .
Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanks mam I glad that u like it and also thanks for your kind suggestion . Smiles 😄😄😄😄

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Added on December 5, 2018
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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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I am a girl of 16 and I'm here to share my writings with you and also to accept your good suggestion. 😊 Keep smiling 😄😃🤣😆😉😊😀😁&.. more..

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