Its not a sin!!!

Fell free to know the actual definition of love....

Distance never fades love rather it makes it strong...
I'm so deeply bound to it that sometimes I think what if I'm doing wrong?

But love is not a sin
Neither its pulling something wrong in....

Its just a beautiful feeling from the heart
That probably purifies a person and cleans up the dirt

But not every people is bornt to understand the beauty of love
Those few love dipped people earn wings to fly like a dove

Love is like rain
When it goes away, heart fills with pain...

And when it starts in weight
The heart goes in the best state

Love is when u can only control the systole,
And someone else does the diastole of ur heart
This is the way how the two love birds never gets apart....

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jemaral]

A beautiful poem that tries to express the authors concept of love... though the ups and downs of the emotion is both mentioned there is a majority in the positive aspects of love which to me gives the piece a generally positive and hopeful tone. I love the the last stanza where technical medical language was used to express the abstract meaning that love can only be sustained with two forces acting together in harmony. Love can be born from a single source but for it to survive it will need the a second complementing source. Excellent work.. thank you for granting us the opportunity to enjoy you work.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you soooooo much .....It means a lot to me....I'm so happy and glad that u understood the true message and meaning of my poem..... :)

[DoormanDan]

Awesome rhyming. This is a very good piece of writing. I love how you compared love to rain(I've never thought of it like that before). Brilliant job. Keep up the good work!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you very much.....I'm glad that u liked it.... :)