Sweet Whispering Air

I whisper

Your name

To the air,

So sweet.

This love

Is ours

To share

Forever.

Forever

Your love,

Incredibly sweet,

Fills the air.

I breathe your name.

This moment we share.

This moment is ours,

The wind a drawn out whisper.

Then you whisper

My name.

On your lips, it sounds so sweet.

You are my love.

This moment is ours.

This place we will share

Forever.

In this sweet evening air.

Reviews

[Sunflower]

i love this one, definately shelving this one in my favorites

[J Todd Underhill]

Ponderous!

[♋ Iris ♋]

I could feel the emotion being put into each word. Adorable and emotion filled piece you wrote here, Taylor ^_^

[Kim's Poems]

Such an emotional piece here,
But i really enjoyed it.
Touched the heart.

[Finally Fallen]

very emotional but amazing piece

[Your Perfect Disaster]

BAD! LOVE IT! BUT BAD GIRL! Quit writing love about my brother xDDDD

[Silentnightmare♊]

this is a wonderfully deep and emotional piece i enjoyed it immensely