What it Takes

oh i cant wait

to feel your bones break

beneath my grasp

for taking what 

was dear to me

so take these words

straight to your heart

my only hope

they f*****g cause you harm

I want to see the life
draining from your open wounds

my ears ache to hear your

violent screams telling of your doom

blood on the walls(blood on the walls)

knife in your throat(knife in your throat)

this is

this is what it takes

to prove

to you and the rest of the world

that i am

not bowing down to fate

no i wont be

forced down, to my knees

i will rise up

even in the face, of my defeat

look me into the eye

how does it feel to know

that your end is nigh

ill slit your throat, with a smile

and watch you f*****g die

this

is what it takes

Author's Note

FEEDBACK, constructive criticism, anything that can help:)

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

inspirational and intense. Needless to say "J'ADORE"

[Lane-roe]

To be honest, I find it pretty hard to find anything to criticise or dislike in your writing. Grammar is really the only thing I can fault (i'll instead of ill for example). Otherwise, the intensity and power behind it is wonderful-great work :)

[Bree]

I can relate.

[kdpgrahi]

Very lovely, I love it

[Carrion.]

VIOLENCE:D
haha. very good.
some grammar errors here and their tho[;

[Kyla H]

Very violent, but I like it in this piece. It has a sense of hope even though you can see there is much struggle, nicely done!

[Allen Smuckler]

Intense....powerful....and structurally sound...
a well written albeit a tad to moribund for my taste..
Keep 'em coming though, Taylor
allen