Hear Breaks hurt, Keep fighting.

"I thought when love for you died, I should die."

A broken heart can feel like a thousand needles,
Always stabbing them selves into your soul. 

Sometimes you just want to give up,
and drift off in to a never ending sleep.

That is one way to get rid of a broken heart,
but not the only way.

So take that heart!
 And  find the one who can glue the pieces back together.

Then your soul will soon begin to heal its self,
Then your life will truly begin!

"It's dead. Alone, most strangely, I live on." ~Rupert Brooke

Author's Note

Reviews would be nice!!

Reviews

[unsavable_soul]

I like the sentiment of this piece.
Hope is the word I think I would use to describe it.
Though the title threw me a little, is it supposed to be here or maybe I am missing the context. Either way very nice work.
Chris

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review, and it is suppose to he heart.
~Your friend Res

[Azriel]

another great piece res, it's full of passion and it's quite honest, but it doesn't sink in misery or sadness instead it chooses to go a hopeful route, which i like a lot. great images and language used here as well...

[Terohime]

Thanks for your review.
~Your friend Res

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow, can't say more, I believe for the honesty of this work. This is a beautiful piece. Captivating words and promising.

love this lines.

So take that heart!
And find the one who can glue the pieces back together.

[Terohime]

Thanks for your feedback.
~Res

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome friend :)

[Rivaxorus]

Nice I like it....though I can't really relate, I've only really truly loved one person and we're still together after two years ^w^

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

"Sometimes you just want to give up/and drift off into a never ending sleep."--isn't this the truth. Your words ring with honesty and rich emotion. I like the style, in a way, it's quite unorthodox, which is refreshing.

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review ^^

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This is so good. A blooming talent...:)

[Terohime]

Thanks ^^

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I see, gradually glueing the small pieces together of a shattered heart, will gradually heal an acheing, broken one, this makes sense, I like the way you are trying to find resolutions for your readers and to hep them, well done, though you might want to say, " a thousand needles" rather than " a thousand of", best

[Terohime]

Oh yeah thanks i'll fix that ^^