Faith Is The Key!

"Faithless is he that says farewell"

Silence is all you hear,
in a world of fear.

We are all faithless creatures,
stuck in the crevice of black.

So let's turn out hopes,
to the youth.

The ones who are pure,
and uncorrupted.

They are our future,
our hopes to a better world.

But things like that won't happen,
Unless we guide the youth of our civilization.

A PUSH!

In a direction that can benefit all of us,
to day and many days to come.

"when the road darkens."
~ J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring

Reviews

[s y e]

Your writing always sends out a message, it is quite powerful and meaningful as well. You put your heart and soul into everything you write. Again, I loved the quotes :P This was another great write from you.... Well done!

[Terohime]

Your reviews are the best Thanks
~Your friend Res

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Your writing always has a heartfelt and quite distinct purpose and meaning. I can tell that you are emotionally connected to everything that you write, which is a very beautiful thing. I liked this one...it didn't fully hit the mark for me in terms of description and imagery, but the flow and the message were beautiful. Thank you for sharing another important message.

[Terohime]

Thanks for your review. Have a wonderful day.
~Your friend Res

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your message is truly uplifting... full of hope and stirs a refreshing sentiment for the youth... Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. ~xo~:)

[Terohime]

Thanks for the lovely review.
~Your friend Res

[Silhouette]

Wow, very wise words and heartfelt…simply breathtaking, well done =)

[Terohime]

Thanks for your review.
~Your friend Res

[Silhouette]

You are welcome.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write.

[Terohime]

Thank you.
~Your friend Res

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah, you had me at Tolkien! An important lesson here, Res - hope in the youth. I make my living doing this. But, I think it's important to keep at least a spark of hope alive for ourselves as well! :) Very good write.

[Terohime]

Thanks ^^
~Your friend Res