Can you hear it.

"When you love someone,"

Can you hear it!

That sound.

Is it?

No it can't be.

Yes!

Yes it is the sound of two hearts,
Beating as one in perfect harmony.

It is the sound of lovers,
Never letting go.

Can you hear it?

Can you hear the sound of love,
That lingers in the air.

Around the two who is locked,
Bonded as one entity.

So, can you hear it?

I surely can.
"you never want to let them go. "
Original quote by Resnera

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A beautiful idea for a write...two hearts that have come into one unified beat. It doesn't happen all that often, but when it does, it is beautiful. I enjoyed the writing, though I would have liked to have seen a little more imagery and personalized description of the "two hearts" and the coming together. Other than that, you are the queen of writing that uplifts the soul.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's true. You can hear that sound. Great piece Res.

[Silhouette]

Awesomely written...I could definitely hear it. =)

[Andie]

Very sweet, and enjoyable. You definitely made me hear it! ^^ lol

[Emerald Seas]

An engaging read!

[Harrisen Viator]

Oh I know this feeling. I love the flow of it, it keeps your mind moving! And I like how harmony and be rhyme although I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. Love is an interesting thing, and I have been in love before, it feels great, but the downside to it is when the other person doesn't feel the same, but let's not dwell on the past or sad. This is a good piece on the wonders of love!
Good job.

[Rivaxorus]

Yush, this instantly made me think of me and my girlfriend xD Nice write I love it.

[Sami Khalil]

A very lovely and sweet poem. I hope you will not have to let go of your love...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Simple and sweet - a light but happy read.