It's Going Down

It's Going Down

A Poem by TheLastEclipse

When you and your enemy fall...


Just keep your eyes peeled.

Watch as all of the skilled,

Sink with their ship tonight.


It will drown in flames,

All of their hopes and dreams.

I’ve got a courageous blight!


Scars have nor hold any hope.

You know you can’t elope.

Your love is delayed and not right.


As much as you fight to conquer,

You’ll never become smarter.

The tragedy will fall!


Your eyes reflect the flames,

As your body enfolds in pain.

You will lose it all!


Courage is a crushing lie to bring us to our knees.

So the truth of the matter is we’ll all do as we please.

The ash drifts upon the air like a kite.


Carry depression through the air,

Along with the scent of burned skin and hair.

The stars aren’t out tonight!


Your sin is increasing with haste,

Due to how much time you’ll waste

All you’ll do is start another fight.


You can’t bring back the dead,

So get that notion from your head,

By slamming your head into the wall!


After bleeding and bawling,

Begin your piteous crawling.

Crawl up and cry in your little ball!

© 2013 TheLastEclipse

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Added on April 4, 2013
Last Updated on April 4, 2013
Tags: Revenge, Falling, Dying, Crying, Deception



Crossville, AL

I have been writing since the age of twelve and have been creating oral tales since before that. I am a Christian but have a twisted way in some of my stories. I write poetry, stories, and I'm a cas.. more..