This Fight

This Fight

A Poem by Lydia

I went through something horrible

And I know I need to tell

Where are all my friends when I need them

When my world begins to melt

I saw my life flash before my eyes

I have nightmares every night

But they don't care, they don't even try

To help me through this fight

I'm going at it all alone

It's something I've becomed accustomed to

There true colors have been shown

You all turned away when I needed you

You resembled friends

But you definitley weren't

You thought that we could make ammends

But the hard way, this lesson you'll have to learn.

 

© 2012 Lydia


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Absolutely amazing. I love the last line!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sadness and desperation flows in it! This is kinda betrayal, guess so :PP ..
Yes, and it's very heartfelt. I specially like this: "When my world begins to melt
I saw my life flash before my eyes
I have nightmares every night"
Those words are kinda most powerful. You're very talented! :**
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is sad i can feel the sadness and emotion you put into i love this its beautiful!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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