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Compartment 114
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Forever Mine

Forever Mine

A Poem by TheOther

The ink spreads dries and scars

as the needles pierce my skin

claiming every bit of me.


Decoding you, unfolding you.
Expanding beneath my skin.
Rushing through me.

Tatooed love.

Injected colours into my heart.

Your true colours, shades of black.


Never to be erased

and never to be forgotten.

I get to keep you forever.


The torture shall never end.

An everlasting hell to steal my sanity.

The pain will last forever...


Sucking away all the light.

Violently suffocating me.

Contempting me.


Into becoming something new.

Something taken over by you.

Forever tatooed, forever mine...


© 2010 TheOther


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So eerie. Haunting. The first stanza caught my attention. Immediately. Very good poetry. I love the last line...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh wow! This was very descriptive and it made me feel like I was actually in the poem with the words, loved the words and how they flowed fluently. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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a deep and clever take ..the metaphor is clear - a interesting concept..nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow....very deep and emotion. Great Work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2010
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TheOther
TheOther

Nicosia, Cyprus



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I'm Christina Christodoulou at the age of 17. My native language is Greek and I live in Cyprus. Awards: Red Instinct Award (5th) Aug 13, 2010 * The Thanatos Award Contest * Beneath.. more..

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