Trust Is Like Paper

Trust Is Like Paper

A Poem by Edward

Trust is like paper,

It can be crumpled and steamed by vapor.

 

Love can be brittle,

And it can break little by little.

 

But when you combine the two,

Only then will you have a strong brew.

 

But if one of these is crumpled by other things,

Then the whole thing will crumble before the king.

 

It will ruin them both,

And will stop all their growth.

 

So listen up and listen good,

Make it strong, where it once stood.

 

And maybe it will go farther,

Farther than it stood.

 

Now im glad you understand,

So come here and take my hand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Edward


Author's Note

Edward
I felt like writing so I just wrote something down. Enjoy :)

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This is Beautiful!! It's an astonishing piece that I enjoyed reading very much!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it :3
AnonymousDude

11 Years Ago

You're welcome!! I"m glad I got the chance to read it!!
Absolutely beautiful. I loved it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Dark Rider

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. ^^
Neat, a really good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is amazing! 100/100 :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :D
Edward

11 Years Ago

:D
Dude!!!! This is awesome!!!! Everytime you flippin' write something It always turns out amazing !!! :D Awesome write like always!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Huh!? You want me to send RR to people?
Edward

11 Years Ago

DO IT >:D haha ^^"
The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Fine! :P

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On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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