Air like a Feather

Just something that came to mind as i cant speak at the moment due to having bronchitus :) (i thin thats how you spell it :L)

Air like a feather
Flows out from my lips.
Mocking and taunting
As it twirls and twists
Its almost angelic
Dancing through the room
But the silence lays as a reminder

That it can never be heard.

Dorment on my tongue
The words lay asleep
Writhing in aggitation
Begging for release
But no matter how many times
I desperetly try
 The words are left alone

 To silently cry
 

Author's Note

I basically wrote this because its hard to not be able to talk at the minuite and i realy miss it.
Made me think of the people out there who cant be heard
Hope you enjoy it :)

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

To have words floating around the mind and to not be able to voice them must be a terribly frustrating situation. I hope you are able to talk again soon and that whatever the cause of your silence, it is not permanent. This was well written. Lydi**

[Daisy Morgy]

thank you!!! :) i sure hope i do soon haha

[annabellee]

what a wonderful write!
loved the imagery, especially the first stanza was great.
Really enjoyed reading this :)

[Pheonix]

I find the way you describe your voice as a feather very interesting, my favorite part is when you describe the words as being "aggitated" and "begging for release" made me realy sympathise with them, Keep on writting always,,, love reading your work

[Nona]

It is very talented! You manage to combine sharp wisdom with a soft beauty of the language and with the excellence of form that you shape through your poem! I love it!

[Daisy Morgy]

aww thanks your too kind :)

[Peter Regal Whittam]

I'm not really into poetry, but this one was good enough for me to enjoy it. A simple, succint yet effective display of emotions.

[Daisy Morgy]

why thankyou very much! :)

[Risaun]

I like this one. You creatively conveyed your emotions. Nice. :)