A Poem by Katrina Lynn.

How hopeless is a Girl who cries? 
 When what
We Say 
creates those lines.
  Her eyes
rimmed red And darkly smudged. 
   Those lines we've left, A bloody grudge. 
    Deserve it? No. How could she?
      We've labeled her a false beauty.
She's nothing more then a worthless w***e. 
         To hide the
Monsters, that We are.

© 2012 Katrina Lynn.

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Wow. This is great. I love this.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very nice. I like the hidden message underneath and the concept of "who the real monster is" that lies under the whole piece. Very interesting choice of a vocabulary. The only criticism I have is to make it longer and add more detail. However, not too much. Its always nice to leave a little to the reader's imagination :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on July 11, 2012
Last Updated on July 11, 2012


Katrina Lynn.
Katrina Lynn.

Hyrule , Eldin, Canada

I'm just, an idiotic teenager attempting to write. Weeooo. Follow me on tumblr?:3 more..

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