Our scars

Our scars remind us

who we have become

Our anger will never let

us forget it.

My tears are eternal.

Your face haunts my dreams

And that is my only regret

Reviews

[Katie Louise Hughes]

Regret is a very deep emotion, and this poem captures it.
Thanks, good job!

[Frantzuu]

Damnn, this is dark, and powerful with a great hidden story behind the scares. great piece. very deep.

[The Water Queen]

In this poem its meant to show that everything the speaker has spoken of is his only regret.

[Michael X]

hm... the ending isn't nearly as good as the opening, the opening is genius,
the middle follws perfectly, i dont like the last line. if you left it out this would be on of the best poems, ive personally read. leaving it in brings the skill to a place it isnt at all, mediocre. thats just my opinion, what do you think?...


Our scars remind us
who we've become

Our anger will never let
us forget it.

My tears are eternal.
Your face haunts my dreams.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a touching story of heartbreak. I have no idea how you wrapped wisdom in such a short piece. Story, Lesson, Warning....all of the above. Fantastic.

[H-Jonesy]

i like where you're going with this. and its wonderfull the way it is, but in my personal opinion i would have put, Our anger remind us who we have become, our scars will never let us forget it.
Now i only say this because scars last for ever (almost) and when you think about never forgeting somehting, i automaticly think of scars. But thats just me, you minght have intended for the lines to be like that and mean somthing else but, im too blind to see it.
but all in all, a very well put togeather peice. Lovely. XD

[r]

"our scars remind us of who we've become" soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo true! nice write and easy read

[Jinx's Heart]

I'm sure you've heard this one before, but I feel I may relate to this poem in a small, slight way. You're very talented! It was great reading your poems. I hope to be able to read more of them. Excellent writing! :)