Still life..

Still life..

A Poem by Tom
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Contemplative

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Pearlescent frog, sat small, silent, squat
just what are you thinking, I know not?
Still life art in diminutive, physical form
as jet black eyes, observe, raging storm 

Permit me close inspection, answer this
are you perturbed or in trance like bliss?
Semiaquatic creature, beguiling, minute,
pray tell, share truth, fate of King Canute?

Bulbous orbs reveal a telepathic cortex
images of man's demise, swirling vortex,
amplified by ignorance, hapless, so blind
inherent his relinquish of ties that bind

And so to avoid the predatory hornbilly
off hopped frog to muse upon waterlily,
grieved, dishearten, like wasted tears
prophetic knowledge, lost on deaf ears!  

© 2023 Tom


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The eyes tell it all; bittersweet; he must sense predators and move about for safety; but I'm sure behind those bulging eyes is a brain, and who knows the smarts of it, but it's sad that this little creature must be on the lookout for predators..... as do humans... who know maybe they are wiser than us... Love your wordage and the photo.
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Many thanks for your visit and perceptive words on the poem new friend! 😉
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome!!
Best B



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A beautiful posted image Tom to accompany your stanzas. A little creature that needs big eyes to ensure its chances of survival. Many predators lurking to make a meal out of its small frame. Your poem is composed eloquently and I am so pleased that a water lily was a suitable escape route for a frog sensing danger.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Indeed, indeed so my friend, small sometimes can pack a powerful punch, thank you muchly!
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Tom.
sometimes nature stops and poses for us...and creates a symphony to accompany the still life painting.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Indeed so, stellar observations Jacob, thank you!
"Bulbous orbs reveal a telepathic cortex
images of man's demise, swirling vortex"

Posted 1 Year Ago


"Still life art in diminutive, physical form
as jet black eyes, observe, raging storm"

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like how you engage the reader by asking questions. Good tool.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


One of your top best poems among others. I like how you put all that in a wondrous picture and perspective. If we all know the whole range or purpose of God's creation, including frogs, we will be amazed.
I always wondered too Tom, on top of what you reveal, why they are green? Could be wrong.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome 😊. Mychly
Tom

1 Year Ago

Green but also many shades of colour, incredible and rich in diversity 👽🐸🦎🐊
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! So good to know. I like the pearlescent too.
The frog you painted with words is a very cute and wise little creature. Pearlescent frog...how beautiful that reads....A thing of true beauty, with such adorable eyes, happy in its own world. Not that it doesn't face its own challenges, not that it lacks for sorrow and tears....I love this deep, many layered poem and the beautiful visuals of the little frog you sketch. You paint us a beautiful picture and you tell us so subtly about life.....


Kudos on another gem of a poem, dear Tom. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your visit and thoughtful comment my friend! 😋
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

It was a lovely read Tom. Keep sharing your poetry, please.
Being in the right place at the right time is just the best! Number one, the picture. Number two, your poem. If not for the photograph, who knows if this poem would ever have been born. Both are just perfect. I really love the format and the language used. Just superlative!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Such an encouraging review thank you muchly!! 😎
Linda Marie Van Tassell

1 Year Ago

The pleasure is all mine. :)
The eyes tell it all; bittersweet; he must sense predators and move about for safety; but I'm sure behind those bulging eyes is a brain, and who knows the smarts of it, but it's sad that this little creature must be on the lookout for predators..... as do humans... who know maybe they are wiser than us... Love your wordage and the photo.
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Many thanks for your visit and perceptive words on the poem new friend! 😉
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome!!
Best B

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