Stoopid in love

Stoopid in love

A Poem by Tony Jordan
"

love scrambles the brain...

"
I would swim the 
9 oceans of the world 
to see your smile 
with my own eyes
 
The 7 continents 
- sure they would hold 
no challenge I'd 
trek them all - bare foot !! 
for a single kiss from you
I'd pick up a keepsake 
at each of the 
10 wonders of the world
For your trinket box
Pick a colour from 
the rainbow and I
promise it shall be 
yours forever
I would give 
both my right arms 
just to hold 
your hand
...so here I am on this 
the 15th of February 
to wish you 
Happy Valentines

© 2017 Tony Jordan


Author's Note

Tony Jordan
captcha = twaddell - damn you captcha you old unromantic !!

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Aloha Tony,

... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.

I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...

Alisa ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
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Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Same to you, from across the way...

Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)<.. read more



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...you'd trek them all bare footed! Wow, now that's admirable!

It's already the day after Valentine's there, in the UK? It's still the day before, here. Hope it was wonderful, Tony!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Our boy in this poem is so far gone in love that he is fumbling along... getting the numbers of ever.. read more
Beautiful and cute.
Have a happy Vals Day too

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I'm so glad cute came through.
Thank you Seashell!!
Happy Valentine's
:))
Wow tony.. that was just so breath takingly beautiful....
so much love oozing out of each line
happy Valentines day to you.
god bless your soul !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Ria I don't deserve your friendship.
Thank you.
You're a special soul.
Happy.. read more
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Wow.

I fell in love with your words whilst I was reading them, Mr. Jordan.

What a beautiful feeling.
Well crafted.

Much love, Tony; you're a great soul,

LR

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I'm touched by your review LR.
Thank you
Happy Valentine's Day my friend.
:).. read more

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Added on February 13, 2017
Last Updated on February 13, 2017
Tags: love, stupid, not wise

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Tony Jordan
Tony Jordan

United Kingdom



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