Fly Blackbird, Fly

Just a little something for the ones that fail to see their hidden beauty

 

 

 

 

Fly blackbird

don't be afraid 

your wings aren't broken 

you're just in pain 

from the wounds  

of your surroundings

and shattered mirrors 

when on cold nights 

of heartless wonder 

you came home crying 

and it seemed

there was no tomorrow 

You didn't see far  

for their blinding glitter 

when all their shining 

casts false shadows 

It was not sunshine 

just all the spotlights 

they can't live without 

and let it be known 

that past the dimming 

when warehouse beauty 

fades into twilights 

you will outshine 

what you fear most now 

So fly blackbird, fly 

don't be afraid 

your wings aren't broken 

you're just in pain,

today

Author's Note

The tattoo on the girl's back reads, "You were only waiting for this moment to be free," from the Beatles' song, Blackbird.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Another motivating poem from you, A. I am glad you featured this one.

"Spread your wings and fly high" is a common phrase or line when we motivate someone to move on and reach his dreams. But here, the color of the bird is emphasized. Having a dark color can bring someone some insecurities. When he experience discrimination because of it, it is very difficult to regain self-worth and confidence.

"don't be afraid
your wings aren't broken
you're just in pain,
today"

I commend you for these lines. Those people who are battling with their own insecurities need to realize their worth. Yes, their wings aren't broken, and they just need the wound to heal. They just need to regain their strength and learn to fly again.

Bravo for this excellent piece, A!

[Antoñyo]

Thank you, Dhaye...Generous as usual.

[Rachael Lea]

I really love this. It is a beautiful message for all to hear. No matter how hard it is we all need to keep going.

[Antoñyo]

Very true, to not give up on ourselves via the unkindness of others.
Thanks so much for your time.

[Rachael Lea]

You are very welcome :) Look forward to seeing more life lessons in the work that you feature!

[Blackbird1968]

I adore this poem! Thank you for the link! I was trying to find it yesterday but there were so many writings I just may have missed it! Great job!

[Antoñyo]

It was awhile back, I figured that. Glad you enjoyed it,
thanks for coming

[Sheila Kline]

There is always hope for the blackbird to fly again with wings spread more fully, and flying into the sunlight of life! Great encouraging words for those who struggle with low self esteem! Thank you for caring enough to write of it!!
The photo is nice too!......beautiful tattoo!

[allura]

this is beautiful!! "so fly blackbird, fly don't be afraid, Your wings aren't broken you're just in pain" that line really touches me!

[Antoñyo]

Thank you so much Allura. I appreciate it.

[zaneybear]

I love this as I do with al of your writings, I love it, they're like hurt, but they're not done yet :)

[Antoñyo]

Zbear, you're too kind. Thanks for your time and review.

[MOON]

Lovely affirming write , like the refrain fly blackbird fly..

[Antoñyo]

Thanks so much for your time reading and the review.

[Dara]

Your beautiful poem reminds me of a line in a song I recently heard. "You are bent not broken". I love the spirit behind your writing. It shows that even though life can bring us pain, it does not have to last.

[Antoñyo]

"it does not have to last" ...yes, I normally have the word "NeverLasting" on my avatars for that very reason. It's the only reason I started sharing my writing years ago; to help others get over pain. A 'takes one to know one' kinda thing.

Thanks for the kind words.

[Sam]

I like it. Words of encouragement but also words that say stop feeling sorry for yourself and move on. Better things will come if you let them. Very nicely written. Thank you!

[Antoñyo]

Nicely written...I'll accept that, but this was a rare piece that poured straight out almost non-stop. 5 minutes or less. LOL

Thanks Sam