I Do Not Understand

I Do Not Understand

A Poem by ToriSchrodi

I do not understand poetry.

Not one bit.

Yet I try anyway.

I try putting down how I feel.

But honestly I don’t know how I feel.

I couldn’t tell you.


Sometimes I feel like I love someone.

But then things get mixed up and I don’t know how I feel.

Things are so complicated.

*sigh*

But I’ve been told, “Hey feeling down? Write a poem.”

So here I go.


Roses are red

Violets are blue…

What do I do?

Do I go left or right?

Do I jump or duck?


So today I sit in front of my screen and wonder what to say…

I wonder,

“How do I put what I feel into words?”

Ironic don’t you think?

Me a writer.

Who cannot put her own feelings into words.

Sad.

© 2016 ToriSchrodi


Author's Note

ToriSchrodi
Please ignore grammar, and criticism is welcome and appreciated

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Ahh well... I think the same... Though I do write nothing of it is ever upto the mark.. But we all gotta keep trying until we beat it and get better at it... I can tell you one thing though.. Even writing down these thoughts into words is achievement enough.. You should be proud of yourself☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ToriSchrodi

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome ☺



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I can totally relate to this! It's so hard to say how you feel and it is ironic cuz your a writer. You just wrote how i've felt so many times. Feelings are the hardest things for me to express. I don't try to make it difficult.. It just is. Really great piece! I loved it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


A good plot. No worries when you write you just pour without any hesitation. Poetry it is indeed and few lines on the lighter side mades it more interesting.

Good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh well... I think the same... Though I do write nothing of it is ever upto the mark.. But we all gotta keep trying until we beat it and get better at it... I can tell you one thing though.. Even writing down these thoughts into words is achievement enough.. You should be proud of yourself☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ToriSchrodi

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome ☺

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ToriSchrodi
ToriSchrodi

Dayton, OH



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I am a amateur writer, and I hope to become a published writer before the end of my senior year. I dabble in poetry but I mostly write short stories and novels. more..

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