Take Me....   (Collaboration by MsJewel and Trace)

Take Me.... (Collaboration by MsJewel and Trace)

A Poem by Trace
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Take me to where we can chase sunsets

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Whispers of an evening breeze
Leaving footprints in the sand
Waves tickling the sunset shores
Lovers strolling hand in hand


Take me to that special place
Take me where the sunset glows
Take me in your warm embrace
Take me now, please take me now


Twilight beckons from afar
Blending scents of salt and sea
Windblown beams of pure light trace
The soft curve of you and me


Take me to that special place
Take me where the sunset glows
Take me in your warm embrace
Take me now, please take me now


Lovely eyes and the taste of
Luscious lips soft against mine
Chasing sunsets 'cross the sand
Waiting for the moonlight's shine


Take me to that special place
Take me where the sunset glows
Take me in your warm embrace
Take me now, please take me now

Take me love as hand in hand
We'll chase sunsets cross the sand.

© 2015 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
a little romantic poem I wrote with my wonderful friend Julie.

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A poem of sweetest romance! I really enjoy the use of nature's beauty here. Well crafted collaboration!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments.
Greatly appreciated.
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Third place winner in the pair up poetry contest

Posted 4 Years Ago


An invitation of utter romance that beckons the magical beauty of a place in a warm embrace. We are all tickled to joyful anticipation. An excellent collaboration... :)....................

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you Sami for your wonderful comments on this collaboration.
I am so glad you liked it. .. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. .....:).......
"Waves tickling the sunset shores"...
shades of sunset purple and gold...
chasing passion in moonlit sighs...
Trace and Julie, you leave me
breathless. truly, Pat




Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Your lovely comments and compliments mean the world to me.
Thank you so very much.
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Beautiful collaboration as always you two ;) What romatic imagery -- chasing sunsets cross the sand. beautiful :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your excellent comments and compliments.

Trace
This would make a wonderful love song, with the repeating lines and the meter - a duet perhaps. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend for your wonderful compliments and comments on our collaboration poem.
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Did you write it all together? Or are parts by one or the other? I love the idea of collaborating poetry! And, like this romantic piece, when it works, IT WORKS! Well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Sometimes it is one way sometimes it is the other.
We work on a poem until we both love it be.. read more
Beautiful, romantic write, Trace.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments.

Trace
Thank you for inviting me to write this with you. I love what you did with our words. You always inspire me my dear friend.

Hugs, Julie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Sometimes we all need a little more inspiration that perspiration.
But sweating the details .. read more
Not only romantic, but uplifting and carefree too. Julie and Trace, the two of you have always written wonderful collaborations. The rhyming is perfect and it is impossible to tell who wrote which lines. Loved it! Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my dear friend.
It is always such a privilege and pleasure to write w.. read more

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