Blossoms

Vines try to hide toes
Amidst flushing pink blossoms
Her feet smile and wave

Reviews

[Ragdoll]

this is a delightful little haiku! at the last line, i imagined her toes wiggling as if waving.. i'm not sure about the smile though, 'cause feet don't usually smile. hmmmm.. you could say "Her feet dance and wave..." just a suggestion.

thanks for pointing me in this direction. i love haikus, although they are not as easy to write as most people would think.

well done!

peace,
~Cat

[Roger F Aucoin]

Nicely done.

[Jacob White Owl]

This is excellent and true to form.

Jacob

[Krystal Waters]

Very good! I loved the wording and it is so sweet!

--Krystal--

[Pat]

A very nice Senryu about smiling toes. I like this.

[Candid Writer]

Delightful. I wonder if my feet can smile.. they better or else I would step on them or else put them in some smelly shoes LOL...just kidding.

Beautiful... and the picture is a bonus.

[Merancapeman]

Ah, that made me laugh. Thank you for making me feel good! As far as I'm concerned, anything can smile and wave at you!

[Melissa M.]

Cute, I like it.