Haiku #5

A Poem by Benjamin L. Weekly

happily buzzing
in the garden-
butterflies feast

© 2008 Benjamin L. Weekly

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David P. Eckert

like this happy littlle image., and a little quixotic. I've never heard a butterfly buzz. Think "float like a butterfly, sting like a bee" - Muhammed Ali.

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yira Simone

This was very good! I read many of your haikus and chose this one to leave a review on. I liked the simplicity in the wording. I noticed that you don't follow that 5-7-5 rule, why is that? It is not a bad thing, I just never seen this style of haiku before. I think you have a knack for keeping it simple and it pays off really well. I'm happy to have you in the I Love Haikus! group. Very good work.-Catrina

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nancy Mc.

A serene picture all most unreal in this day and age. You have capture the elegant beauty of what a garden holds.

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 23, 2008

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Benjamin L. Weekly

Roseburg, OR

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I am 22 years old and live in Roseburg, OR. I presently work full time. At my job, I handle second tier tech support by phone and answer emails for a major company. As such, I have the privilege of.. more..