Suicide Note

I'm sorry, I'm not feeling too good today so I have to release through poetry

I shiver and I cry,

I avoid your eye,

For me the world is

a more daunting place.

I hate my own face,

I'm all over the place,

I can't keep eye contact

with anyone.

I cry every day,

Wish my life away,

Existing isn't really

my priority anymore.

I'd die if I could,

Some think I should,

I'd cleanse the world

of my negativity.

What do I say,

I'm not okay,

But I'm not the

weak feelings type.

Goodbye those who liked me,

Goodbye those who hated who they see,

Why did I even bother,

to live anyway?

Author's Note

Honest reviews please!

Reviews

[NightWatch]

This is has a definite emotional charge to it, and I (and I'm sure many others) can relate to the feelings you describe. Lately, it seems that negative events have been unfolding as of late and it piles up really quickly.
That being said, I sincerely hope things start working out in your favor. Best of luck to you :)

[TwoDaysTooLate]

Wow! Thank you :) you've hit the nail on the head there... Poetry is my escape route :) Thank you - I'll need all the luck I can get xD
jay x

[Rowen]

I really like this poem and I understand the way your feeling, kinda. I am depressed but I never really thought of suicide that much, not to sure. There are a lot of things out there that can make you really upset and I understand, keep making these awesome poems and stay strong :)

[TwoDaysTooLate]

Thank you so so much for the review :) it's really nice to see that people appreciate my work! I'll keep writing poems - I don't really listen in class so I write poetry instead... xD