Goodbye my frosty friend.

Goodbye my frosty friend.

A Poem by Ryan Falzon - Tymon
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Saying goodbye to winter!!

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Goodbye my frosty friend.


Goodbye my frosty friend,
I will no longer feel your chill
down my Icy hand.

I will miss you, we all will.
Especially when we started,
Sliding down that small hill

My fingers are now free,
from the clothed prison
that protected me.

At the time of solstice,
you covered my shelter
all with ice.

As a reflex, I shiver,
but don’t take me wrong,
I enjoyed winter.

I shall dwell on your leave,
but as the unspoken promise says,
you will be back for another eve.

Longing for your return, I wait
but I am not worried,
For you are never late.

© 2010 Ryan Falzon - Tymon


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How adorable in its innocence. It has the voice of a child happily saying goodbye to a beloved mascot, knowing that there'd be a next time. It is a relaxing poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 10 Years Ago


A really touching tribute to an often-harsh season. It's almost like a personification of winter; and like talking kindly of a powerful friend whom you love as well as fear. Neat and strong, using unwasted words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


@Jessica mai.

It depends really where you live, here we get a slightly cold winter, but it's quite a godsend after the exhausting sun. We get no snow here, sadly :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


By the time winter comes around each year, I'm usually quite ready for it. Nice writing, Tymon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I hate winter so this helped me understand why some people love it. I really like the clothed prison and the shelter of ice. Very good descriptions. Good write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this poem, had a good rhythm to it. Great flow thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 6, 2010
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Ryan Falzon - Tymon
Ryan Falzon - Tymon

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