Love

Sudden fall

Love is the moment
my heart meets yours
time stands still
the sun bursts
and it feels
like my first
day on earth

Author's Note

Just a little diddy

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

This I really love. It`s simple as nothing more needs to be said...the sun bursts... :)
Yes, it`s first day when you dont think about the end day too

[Wondering Mind]

Love, timeless. Loved the imagery of the sun bursting

[Kent Rawski]

Hmmm you chose the line most did not thank you for reading

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow! Just wow Kent. You capture in a short verse the essence that most of us seek in any loving relationship. First day on earth sounds so profoundly loving!

[Kent Rawski]

thanks a lot john adam an eveesque?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed so but my always seeking true love mentality loved first day on earth as truely falling in love!

[Kent Rawski]

😉 Thank you

[Chris Shaw]

Brevity which speaks volumes and in a most amazing way. Love this poem.

Chris

[Kent Rawski]

thanks Christine guess why love fills up volumes its a treasure

[Chris Shaw]

Love is the best treasure:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what an amazing expression of love... imagining the speaker looking forward to the second day on earth.
j.

[Kent Rawski]

Lol thank you jacob

[Adam Latham]

It may be a short piece but it's a beautiful one! I loved it. Well done! :)

[Kent Rawski]

Thank you Adam for reading sharing and being on this site I haven't been here long but prepare to be amazed good writers are here

[Lea Sheryn]

True! You say so much in a very small amount of words.

[Kent Rawski]

Ty lea for reading and your kind words

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome, Kent.

[Reilly]

Short and sweet and beautiful !

[Kent Rawski]

thank you I reviewed yours sure hope more to come

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Wow! :)
This is a lovely little diddy!

[Kent Rawski]

Thank you for reading hope it uplift you

[Edie Blue Starfish]

You're welcome. :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

I do love this.
And
it's true people spend so much effort trying to force that magical blending. But when its the real deal we come to that other person with no baggage just our hearts

[Kent Rawski]

Just keep it short and sweet😉 thanks for reading and enjoying