The Forbidden Things

Just thinking about things.

These forbidden things.

They creep into my mind

As I think.

Make it burn,

Make it cold,

Make it smooth,

Make it bubbly.

Tip it into the empty cave

And wash away the day.

Suck it in.

Fill the air.

Smile as the curls come off my lips.

Either cough,

Or take to the high heavens.

Kiss my skin, lover?

Take a bite,

Make me bleed.

Soak in the release when it's over,

Then hide the scars you leave me with.

These forbidden things.

They creep into my mind

As I think and sink.

Reviews

[Chris]

like counting flowers on a wall...drifting to nuthin...

[Dye]

Great read, it comes of sensual at first, but after reading it again I believe your talking about booze, smoking and drugs and in a very descriptive but not in your face kind of way.

[Bound In Red]

Very well done. But you missed one. And thank you for the wonderful review.

[Dye]

Yes, well truthfully I wasn't sure if that one was sex or shooting up LOL.. 2 out of three's not bad. You are welcome :)

[Bound In Red]

Those still are quite right. But good try. :)

[shallimarRose]

Very interesting Nesh.. I think this is a good piece. Dare I say that to me it had some lines that almost leading to erotica.. I see you are only seventeen. I am looking forward to reading more from you. shallimarRose

[Bound In Red]

Thank you for the review. And I'm very glad that you took those lines how I wanted people too, but that is not what they actually mean.