Under your Spell

Under your Spell

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This crazy feeling

This...sexual healing

The fire kindling

~

This love I'm feeling

This crazy urge

Soon our bodies will merge

~

I was waiting for it

The pain, the pleasure

Your fangs cutting through the leather

I try to hold myself together

But its too late

I'm all the way under

© 2008 ;


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Good job, this piece was vivid and nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Congratulations on your vampire-contest win!

Sal

Posted 12 Years Ago


Vampires? Vampires are not the only creatures with fangs. It could be a werwulf, a vlorlok...I love all the old words for the children of the night. very nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short sweet and too the point, a very nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this one! Full of passion and excitement the feeling of letting go, submitting to the throes of extasy and sexual momentum.

I loved the first stanza. It's image of something that breaks us down and heals us at the same time was really good.

Beautiful poem E!

Your humble Wolf,
Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


One of my favorites of yours... the feelings you have were vivid and amazing... it flowed like dripping blood. It's funny how vampires can put us under a spell... I loved the use of leather and fangs and everything... Very seductive... GREAT JOB!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow that was awesome =D

And vampires rule

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a fabulous fast pace write that shows just how crazy and wonderful love can be... and just like avampire it can last for eternity!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


a very nice seductive twist using vampires. i like it. you described the sexual experiences of the narrator very well here. Awesome! loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem. I like it. Vampires eh? I love em personally.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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