Humans Respire

All humans in this world respire,

but few human lives inspire.

Most do not wish to achieve expertise,

they wish to see that experts retire.

When most see others succeeding,

they burn in envy's fire.

Most do not pursue their aspirations,

rather they stab what others aspire.

Few work on their dreams 'Vatsal'

most wish that dreams of others expire.

Author's Note

Review the poem and point out the cons.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Humans Respire"
Vatsal Rohilla,
Remind me again what makes us all tick? Our hearts beat to the aspirations; our very motivational power.
Precious is the heart that discovers that giving is what matters. Listening to another's story and giving affirmation: what a gift!
You have placed the topic before the eyes: It is beautiful!
Blessings to you.
Kathy.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

It cheers one up when somebody superior in years, experience and understanding appreciates him or her.
I could not have had a better return to Writers Cafe than your reviews and blessings.

[Lina Lotus]

t has an awesome feel like ..a take this~~punch lol That's how it made me feel...so unfortunate that some humans can let others success make them bitter instead of trying harder to accomplish their goals. This is engaging. Thank you :)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you very much Lina Lotus for those kind words.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome!!!
often the majority is at the wrong end of the thread..........sad but true......
effectively put......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you bhai for your review and glad that you found it pleasing

[H.L. Cerveise]

Love, love, love this one. I know a lot of people who just take up space and consume everything around them but never give back. They are also the ones who say things like, you think to much, you empathize to much, etc, etc. However, when they see what is good and fruitful in another's life they are the first to envy and to poke holes other people's accomplishments.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you very much sir for your review. It is tough to change people, one has to adapt and lead life somehow.

[Kirsty Woodward]

Beautifully written. It's hard to stay positive & focus on your goals when people choose to put you down & make negative remarks. But, if you do, you will be rewarded & those people will be left behind.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Precisely, precisely. Envy is something which results in all the unnatural deeds- bad deeds. Thanks for the review.