Loud

Loud

A Poem by Sigyn

An exclamation point, Can mean much, But for me it stands, For the word, Loud. It is annoying and crude, It ends all sentences, With a disturbing bang, of hate and pain, it is Loud. Exclamation points, Are often overly used, Why can't people use them right?! See, now I am Loud. I have misplaced my words, Said the wrong things, But I do not regret this, You were too, LOUD! See, another line and dot, At that the end of my sentence, Capital letters only make it worse, How I hate it when people are, Loud. Laughing and giggling, Yelling and shouting, Fuming with unexplainable anger, How I wish things were, QUIET!

© 2011 Sigyn


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Sigyn
This was really, really stupid. I was going to commit a murder, so I decided to vent...with a poem...

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Not stupid at all... a lighter poem, but insightful nonetheless. I love the wordplay at the end with "quiet" in caps. I also like how you chose to put "LOUD!" (in caps with the exclamation point) more in the middle of the poem, whereas most would have intuitively placed it at the end for some sort of buildup. But I really like the urgency in the middle followed by a calm "Loud." and then the capital QUIET!

ha. okay now I'm being obnoxious. Great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You were playing!! Don't be too hard on yourself! He said loudly.

I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Cool!... oops sorry...
not stupid-very creative-
i love it !--oops again :)
(really-very unique-great poem)

:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think that the last stanza was not needed. No offense, but it doesn't sound like you wrote it seriously (if you did at all, idk).
I do like this, though.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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