Unspoken words

The suns rays speak no truth
Of the beauty that lies beneath
Buried in a veil of youth
Golden in its sheath
There is naught that I can compare
To the sight that lies before me
The image of one so fair
Is the image a yearn to see
With open arms and open heart
I cannot gain composure
Not wanting to be apart
But disdaining sudden exposure
To live In a lie
And turn against this emotion
It brings forth a treasure of the eye
Yet I cannot speak of my devotion

Reviews

[HeavenSunArcadez]

wow very well written... and powerful message as well as great rhythm and delivery.. that first line alone set the whole pace for the write...
"The suns rays speak no truth
Of the beauty that lies beneath "

whats on the inside will always out shine whats on the surface...but many are too blind to see that til something happens.. to open up there sight to the unseen and unheard... wonderful piece...

[Trent Files]

Thank you very much! It's always nice to see that someone else enjoys and understands the messages within a poem.

[HeavenSunArcadez]

your very welcome i consider the message within this more important than anything... especially since the world tries to brainwash society into believing whats skin deep is most important... however everything has its season and when that dies, whats left.. a person whos ugliness turns them inside out til there a shell of there former selves ... thanks again this write was awesome

[Trent Files]

No problem!