Feeling Lonely

Feeling Lonely

A Story by kyrie
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for the prompt a day

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Hey!  I'm getting dusty! >.> 

Trust me, I'm very grateful to you for rescuing me from a bus alley and giving me a blanket and a home and a name.  (I really love the name Harvey! :D ) But really…

 

You haven't talked to me in forever!  You haven't held me, or cuddled me, or kissed my head.   I miss it.  I miss you!  Please come back? 

 

I know you're watching the Super Bowl right now, but…someday soon?  Pretty please?

 

Your bestest pet,

Harvey!

 

P.S.�"I love my blanket.

© 2011 kyrie


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it's always funny how we talk to our pets...good job...but a little confusing with the whole pet talking thing...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'm alittle confused about what this poem is about. It sounds like it is written from the perspective of a pet, but I'm unsure what kind of pet it is? It's a really cute poem though, and one that made me smile. This story is written good, but it could have been alittle bit longer. There are a few places where you could add a little bit more detail.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Made me go "Aww". Really cute but kind of sad, too.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Heya there :D My name is Kyrie (KEAR-ee-ay), but call me Ky. I had an account on here, but it got all messed up, and so I have this one now. I love to laugh and enjoy people. I'm a bit of an ecce.. more..

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