Dancing in the rain

I will never play in the "gutter" with you

even as your angry words rain down on me

I will never let you pull me down with you

So let it rain



You can't hurt me anymore

I am free of you and your never ending cycle of drama and need

So let your words rain down on me

Let the lightning strike

Let the thunder roar



You will never win a war that only exists in your mind

I hope you see someday that you are really angry with yourself

Till then, let it rain down

let it rain down, rain down on me



I will always dance in the rain

I will dance in your rain

let it rain let it rain let it rain

down on me



Let the lightning strike

let the thunder roar

I will be dancing in your storm

free of you

dancing, dancing, dancing

in the rain

I will always be dancing in the rain
 

Reviews

[Badmac (Brenda )]

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That freedom is the best feeling in the world!
I work in a shelter for abused women and children
this write caught my attention.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I was moved by the very same verse as the R&R Cowboy:

"So let your words rain down on me
Let the lightning strike
Let the thunder roar "

You dance in that rain Victoria, for there can be no battle, no conquest, no further harm ... without foe. Dance like no one is watching!

[Lydia Shutter]

A poem of inner peace and empowerment. No one should have the power over you. You alone have the power to control your destiny and to dance in the rain. Intensely emotional write. I enjoyed it. Great sound effects and graphic to accompany your words as well.

[Rain]

Wow.
I can't tell you how overwhemed I was with this. Your brave, strong cry of freedom. NO-ONE should ever hurt you, and you wrote it so clear. The words, combined with the picture and storms sounds swept me away. It is inspiring to see a woman break free from that kind of relationship. It was beautifully written. Rain..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

"So let your words rain down on me, Let the lightning strike, let the thunder roll" for such a tragic topic you wrote so beautifully... I love the use of bad whether as sybolism for the abuse.

[Iretex2012]

I love how you say your free of this person...great write....
My fav. lines are
I will always dance in the rain
I will dance in your rain
let it rain let it rain let it rain
down on me

[..]

Thunder can roll around just like our thoughts. lightning can be our anger source and the rain well it just feels good against our skin. This is simply well written...Kim

[Yvonne Heidt]

I also can relate. This is so empowering. I loved it.

[Charlotte Marie]

What A greatPoem! I can relate to this 100%!!! Great read! Beautifully written. That freedom is the best feeling in the world!!! ~Charley~

[J. M. Yeary]

Wow, a little bitter are we...lol! This is a great read Vickie...what music genre will this be? This is my favorite line.

I will never play in the "gutter" with you even as your angry words rain down on me. I will never let you pull me down with you. So let it rain.

I agree that you should never let anyone pull you down, and I especially like the just bring it attitude telling him that no matter what you say or do I will always be me...SO LET IT RAIN DOWN!

I am so glad you came aboard, and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Take care :-)