Losing you~

Losing you~

A Poem by Victoria Lee~

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In the luminous moonlight 
On this cold December night
I pass the time thinking of you
Every last memory is embedded
Deep inside my mind
Your smile could warm the coldest heart
That impish grin always got you whatever you wanted
Your laughter was the sweet sound of a symphony
Your beautiful blue eyes were the color of the sky
I reflect back on what we could have did to save you
The reality is it is too late
You are gone
You walk now with the man above
Your laughter fills the heavens
As your humor causes the Angels to giggle
Your smile reflects down on us
 In the warm sunshine we feel on our skin
And the rain I used to feel was the tears we cried over losing you
Is really raining down on us to wash away the pain
We loved you with all our heart
And we let you go with all our love
Salu' Dad , Michael and Christopher
On this Christmas
We are are missing you ………….
 first draft..............

© 2008 Victoria Lee~




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Very beautiful and touching... the best thing we can do is remember that our loved ones that pass os are now helping God in bringing peace amongst mankind and protecting heaven from evil... God bless you and you family on this holiday... I am sure he looks down on you with a smile as my mom is doing to me right now.

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The holidays approaching are really hard when you have lost loved ones so dear to your heart. This poem is very beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

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Very beautiful and touching... the best thing we can do is remember that our loved ones that pass os are now helping God in bringing peace amongst mankind and protecting heaven from evil... God bless you and you family on this holiday... I am sure he looks down on you with a smile as my mom is doing to me right now.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Victoria Lee~
Victoria Lee~

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