So Am I...

So Am I...

A Poem by Vin

The King said:
"You are on your own walking bare foot and empty handed."
"why you don't need anything in this world?"

"Why you came to meet me empty handed?"- The mystic asked
'"'I'm just a visitor here"

"So Am I" - The mystic smiled.


LOVE

© 2019 Vin


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We are all visitors and none of us knows how long our stay will be for. We arrive empty handed and we leave empty handed. What happens in between can make you a beggar or a king, but in the end the common factor is we will all become dust. That's where your lines took me Vin, this fine morning.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Wow, this brings a smile to my heart. Love this.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

3 Months Ago

Thank u ! sending love!
Allie Brumfield

3 Months Ago

You're welcome! ♥️ :)
Short but thought provoking

Posted 7 Months Ago


we are all visitors to this life...and the only thing we can take with us is our love....as well as our kindness...if we possess them.
Empty handed of material wealth...is not really being empty handed where it counts.'
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


I think despite our clutching, we all remain empty-handed. Great philosophical write, Vin:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


yep just passing thru Vin:) LOL I can't help but feel I have been here before but my memories are a bit sketchy so I write them down for posterity...

Posted 9 Months Ago


Chuckling here... Would that life worked out that way - good for stories, iffy in movies, bad in real life.

Posted 10 Months Ago


All of us are just visitors. Nobody is here to stay.
Beautifully penned, mate.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Reminds me a a little bit if an Eagle's song "Hotel California" Very interesting read, like this

Posted 10 Months Ago


we all are, this is really good. enjoyable

Posted 10 Months Ago


We all are, and so we should wander and see as much as we can, for later it will be too late.
Excellent ideas masterfully expressed as always.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Tags: Mystic, Sufi, Poetry, Quotes, Short

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