Symbiotic

Symbiotic

A Poem by Vin

 

 

Symbiotic are good and evil,

one in the same but not.

Entwined in a lust to prevail

is a goal that each have sought.

 

Tender is good that can

be seen in a child's eyes.

Unlike the sins of man,

found in his vulgar lies.

 

Ambiguous implications

cloud the light of truth.

The exposed dissertation

of those with no proof.

 

Good and evil are akin

to the violence in whole.

As well as good living within

our irreplacable soul.

© 2012 Vin


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it's very poignant and thought provoking. you capture the absurdity of the world today. great poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like the message here is that good and evil go hand and hand; and may not be entirely different from one another--more that, man gives Good and Evil its definitions.

"Good and evil are akin

to the violence in whole.

As well as good living within

our irreplacable soul." This here is interesting in the way that Good and Evil have each had their wars against one another and in the name of their respectable efforts. For example, one might see the Axis as evil given they were the enemy of the allies in World War 2, yet, in the same breath, the Axis saw the Allies not as good but as evil given that their children were being killed on the front lines. It's an interesting concept: what is really Good and Evil? And here's my answer; Man doesn't know the definition of Good and Evil to its fullest extent...however they have an idea: Death is Evil and Life is Good. When conflict comes to one extreme I believe we can, with a bit of wisdom, decipher the meanings of Good and Evil.

Anyway, that wasn't my opinion necessarily--what I just stated above was actually what I believed your poem to be about ;). I love the format btw, very professional and pristine. The word choice was sophisticated and above average with most poets today. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a good piece. I really liked it a lot. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :O xxx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Two steps forward, fifty back lol
The realisation, the light in focus, then distorted, gaining distance!
Life is a realisation process, the yearning of duality is a battle!
Well written love!
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


no words for this but good job...I like the line "Ambiguous implications

cloud the light of truth." though...awesome..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very splendid keep up the good work hon xoxoxox

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it! So powerful and rivriting! The words are deep and profound! Excellent job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hm. Interesting write we have here. What's sad is that I can't seem to quite find the words to describe what goes on in this piece.
It was deep, good job.

~N~

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Last Updated on February 22, 2012
Tags: good, evil, sin, violence, soul

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Vin
Vin

United Kingdom



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