Poetic Intellect

My heart spoke
poetic intellect
in clever
erotic metaphors

Spoke them into brittle bones
that scraped scars away
from the flesh
of darkened
heart sick
memories

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

Wow! I love the length of the poem. It allows the reader to absorb the importance of the message behind the poem. Therefore, I am able to interpret it with detail.

QUOTE DISSECTION

1. "Poetic intellect"

Beautiful language! Poetry is intellect through:

(1) Unlimited Possibilities
(2) EMOTION
(3) Structural Poetry Practice

2. "Erotic metaphors"

This line indicates that you understand that your poetry is:

(1) Fantasy: The fantasy is your way of taming down the reality of the sexual experience through erotica.

At times, we confuse Pornography and Erotica. In fact, it makes me a little hostile:P

3. "...darkened
heart sick
memories"

This line is an excellent play on words. The previous imagery details of "brittle bones" made me cringe in a good way. "Memories" are scattered in perception. Truth is difficult to grasp because everyone tells the past in a different way.

"Time will heal scars." This is a generic quote, but it does lend some wisdom.

CONCLUSION

Overall, I thought it was a thought provoking piece that most people will understand.

Excellent work!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You give the most detailed reviews and I love it .. I wish I could review like you do its like you deconstruct on a sub atomic level .... I wish someone would do that to me and in a way its done through my poetry and I think that is why I/we poets love to get reviews

[Vria P Crow]

hehe You already speak my language:D I love you put it: "sub atomic level." It gave me a chuckle because it sounded so intelligent which is something I respect. Well, I am always here to do that for you.

I do not send requests often because others can browse my work. I do it from time to time if I think you would like it. For instance, I am going to post a request on your comment box that is up to you to read.

:D

Thank you for your compliments:D

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Intelligence is something I greatly respect as well. and Thank you I use to send RR's but its just got so hard to do and time consuming I have over 500 friends on here and like last night I posted I think 5 new poems but if you count all day it was more like 10 or so and there is no way I can click that many RR"s I mean really WC should update the RR box like exclude everyone who don't take RR's than also give the option to select all with one click. This I have suggested to this site a few times but I guess it falls on the silent cyber ears of man and ... uh what do you call them ... the guys who run the site lol

Please feel free to send any in a message I gave up on my RR's cause I have over 4000 and it got daunting so lol yeah anyway thank you for your time and reviews

[Spookers]

I really like this. Is it talking about how, when you write poems, it's a way of letting out feelings?

[ape domenigoni]

I love that I connected with this poem right away. It flows so well and captured me with the first few words and I love the last three lines:
of darkened
heart sick
memories

Good work!

[Ravyne Hawke]

wonderful imagery and great use of metaphors.. I love the size of this poem which means that every word, every line has to hold importance, and it does. I am glad that I found you and your incredible work.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much Thanks

[Chris]

I've not ever seen you write a "clever" word. Each was always real and felt. You tease sometimes... but above the collar IS really where below the belt truly resides.