Bleeding Out

Bleeding Out

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

You cut into me
removed my heart
and the beating
of my soul died slowly
than all at once
you handed it
half dead
back to me

And you tried
to stitch up
my chest

And than

And than you
acted like
nothing
happened
like you did
nothing wrong
like you were
the only one broken
like you were
the only one
drowning
in pain

You acted like
you were
the one
bleeding

And the worst part

The worst part was

While I overlooked
my own wounds
tending to yours
trying to double stitch
your ripped broken darkness
into a new broken
puzzle piece heart

Neither one of us saw
that I was bleeding to death



By Samantha Pruitt

© 2015 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
Woke up with a poem in my soul

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a poem full of pain,and you painted a vivid picture,great job loved the art

Posted 8 Years Ago


At what point does he get cut up and need your services. Before or after he removed your heart, before or after he handed it back to you half dead, before or after he attempts to stitch you back up and then act like nothing ever happened?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometimes the poems we wake up with are the truest, most honest statements we make. Outstanding!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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